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Marissa, Back Story

I was born on far off planet named, Chrozonoir.

Chrozonoir seemed like a pretty calm planet, until I was born.

The gods of Chrozonoir tested my skills as a member of the Chrozo.

The first was of Speed.
Passed.

The second of Courage.
Passed ...

The last was of ... Revealance, the test in which revealed you as a Chrozo or not.

I stepped towards the Great gods Temple and asked "Please ... gods of Chrozo ... Reveal me ..."

The gods heard my plead and ... they laughed.
They said "Marissa of Chrozo family Youhl.

...

You are ...

Not worthy to be revealed ..."

The saints of Chrozo heard this and instantly stripped me of my clothing, not caring if I was female.

They threw the sacred robes that I was wearing into the fiery pits and yelled at me.

The chased me through the village, as I was still nude ...

As I looked behind me, the whole village was after me too.

Tears ran down my face, for I knew I did not belong here.

I ran to the Woods, I knew it would be safe there.
I hid in the great tree, and caught my breath.

I could hear the village, still yelling.

After the yelling died down, I looked to see if everyone was gone.

No one was there.

I got up and started to walk towards the edge of Chrozonoir.
The end of Chrozonoir itself, and I killed myself.

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:iconchocolatebananapop:
Wow, I'm sorry. :c

((DUDE, THAT IS SUCH A COOL STORY))

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Marxtosis(märks'tō'səs),n.: The process in which a crazy backstabbing jester splits itself in half, resulting in a black hole.

CBP (sē' bē' pē ),v.: To make artwork that makes you swear you're on drugs.
:iconrainbowknight1:
Th - Thank you ...

((Thanks!))

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:iconchocolatebananapop:
c:>

((Seriously, awesome.))

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Marxtosis(märks'tō'səs),n.: The process in which a crazy backstabbing jester splits itself in half, resulting in a black hole.

CBP (sē' bē' pē ),v.: To make artwork that makes you swear you're on drugs.
:iconrainbowknight1:
:cries:

((I think I'll make a sequel, on how it feels to die for her.))

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:iconchocolatebananapop:
D:> Don't cry, sugarplum!!

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Marxtosis(märks'tō'səs),n.: The process in which a crazy backstabbing jester splits itself in half, resulting in a black hole.

CBP (sē' bē' pē ),v.: To make artwork that makes you swear you're on drugs.
:iconrainbowknight1:
I have to ...
I can't help feeling so lonely ...

((Part 2 is done, see ya later because I g2g!))

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A high-ranking Nobody. It is very agile as it moves around defying gravity.

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:iconchocolatebananapop:
Aw, y'all shouldn't feel lonely! D:

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Marxtosis(märks'tō'səs),n.: The process in which a crazy backstabbing jester splits itself in half, resulting in a black hole.

CBP (sē' bē' pē ),v.: To make artwork that makes you swear you're on drugs.
:iconrainbowknight1:
But I am ...
I feel so lonely ...

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A high-ranking Nobody. It is very agile as it moves around defying gravity.

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:iconchocolatebananapop:
D:>

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Marxtosis(märks'tō'səs),n.: The process in which a crazy backstabbing jester splits itself in half, resulting in a black hole.

CBP (sē' bē' pē ),v.: To make artwork that makes you swear you're on drugs.

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